Liz Guthrie was very exited about starting her first year at Sanora Academy. She could hardly contain herself as she waited to be sorted. When it was her turn to take the potion she confidently gulped it down. She then turned yellow from head to toe.
Teppenpaw.
Liz went to the appropriate table and sat down with the other students in her house. After a few minutes she turned back to mouse-brown, blond high-lighted hair, slightly tanned skin, and mud brown eyes.
Liz politely listened to Headmaster Bulla as he made his opening speech, though her stomach was growling like crazy. Finally the feast began. Liz didn't gorge herself but she wasn't too concerned about her weight either as she started to eat to her stomach's content.
Liz, Liz, Liz, you must expand your posts. This is like cowriten fanfic girl. See the posts below for ideas. What is your character feeling? What does she see? What is she wearing? What does she want to eat? What is her family like? How is Sonora the same as/different than home? Use imagey.
(Sorry if I'm overstepping my authority here but Nikki's and Liz's authors are best friends. I really feel the need to help her.)